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Retailing has become one of the most efficient and talked about services. Retail sales consists of goods or merchandise in a fixed location. Examples of retail businesses include Meijer, Kroger, and Wal-Mart that have one thing in common, which is to retain customer satisfaction. I am a regular customer at the Avon Wal-Mart Superstore for about a year and it has been a very good experience. For instance, Wal-Mart provides the customers with cheap prices, great service, a clean store, store that has about everything, and which is time effective. I took a survey of customers that shop regularly at Avon Wal-Mart Superstore on their viewpoints that are expressed in proving my aim more accurately. I believe that Avon Wal-Mart superstore is a better place to shop than other retail stores.
Wal-Mart is a great store for cheap prices. Have you considered the prices? The prices are at its peak. For example, considering grocery, clothes, and gas, it is clearly too expensive for many families to afford an item and so the customers wait on the item for a better and affordable price the next time they visit. Two of the many customers surveyed agreed that the reason they shop at Wal-Mart is the low and affordable prices. Wal-Mart’s understands the customers concern on the cost, so Wal-Mart usually ends up with the lowest and affordable prices. If another retail store has the merchandise for a cheaper price than Wal-Mart, then Wal-Mart price matches the item for customer satisfaction. For instance, if lettuce is sold at Kroger for 88 cents and Wal-Mart is selling it for 98 cents, the management gives cashier’s the authority to run the lettuce in for 88 cents. This specific method is called “price matching”. When asked, how many do you save monthly since you shop at Wal-Mart? One of the customers commented “I think about $300 to $400 a year.”
Wal-Mart staff and management are really helpful and nice. Every customer expects a warm welcome and appreciation management should have for customers. Wal-Mart helps customers with any concern a customer might have like if certain merchandise price is missing or if it is out of stock. Wal-Mart recognizes the importance of customer satisfaction, and so Wal-Mart associates are always present to assist problems regarding the prices, merchandise, or theft within a store. One of the customers surveyed commented “I would rate the management three out of five. Sometimes they are rude, it depends on who you are talking to.” Wal-Mart does not intend to loose any of its valuable customers and even if the customers insist on a discount on merchandise it is more than likely the management will reconsider the merchandise and reduce the price down about ten percent. Wal-Mart has this button in the site to store section, where customers presses this button on the screen and awaits for assistance. A member of management rushes to approach the customers question and or concerns and assist their problems fast as possible. Wal-Mart greeter’s encourage customers to continue shopping at Wal-Mart with their humbleness and gratitude expressed with terms like “Welcome to Wal-Mart or Thank You for shopping at Wal-Mart”.
Wal-Mart is a clean store. Especially for mothers and fathers the number one priority is their children’s safety. Wal-Mart has certain employees perform the safety sweep. Wal-Mart provides the safety sweep once every three to four hours so if there is a spill or any mess, the safety sweep associate will clean the mess for the customers safety. One of the customers surveyed named Ashley Vega agreed that Wal-Mart is a clean place to shop and safe for her kids. If within those three hours a spill occurs then an associate will call or page for maintenance to report to a certain aisle or register and clean the mess as soon as possible for customer’s and children safety. Wal-Mart knows that a clean store is a safe store to shop at. In comparison to other retail stores that are dirty and might have mice or cockroaches present.
Wal-Mart has about everything. Wal-Mart carries various types of merchandise or items that a customer can consider to buy. Wal-Mart has grocery, apparel, house ware items, electronics, photo lab, bakery and deli, shoes, jewelry, alcohol and cigarettes, tire lube express, smart style salon, lawn and garden, gas station, subway and many more. Wal-Mart intends to save customers from making multiple visits to stores just to get a required item. One customer agreed that it takes like one minute to find something like milk, clothes, shoes, and etc. Even though Wal-Mart has various types of merchandise it also is organized with signs or borders explaining where the items is placed.
Wal-Mart is open for twenty four hours. There are number of families that work day shifts and have problems shopping in the morning or early afternoon and vise versa. Wal-Mart understands that fami